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It is said that seeing is beliving .However when we seeing something and make a conclude is not correct right now. For example, we see two boys who are steat on the table eating breakfast. Suddenly,the litter boy is crying and the older boys without said any worlds. General speaking,the parents must to be thing is the brother made the litter boy crying and then to blam the brother. In my points, may be is the litter boy do not eating enough oranother reasons.
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