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复杂句采用很棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
It is NanJing that I want to advise you to visit most.As a economically developed city having a long history,NanJing not only owns advanced economic but also has great and profund Chinese literature. Since,NanJing has existed for centuries,there are many hesitations left from our actors which represent our ancient civilization,such as Sun Yat-sen Mausolem,Tombof emperor ZhuYuanzhang and XuanWu Lake.All the over places are truly worth your visit and I'm sure you will enjoy yourself so much as to forget to leave there.Meanwhile,being one of several well developed cities in China,NanJing also consists of large shopping malls,beautiful public gardens and various entertainment venues.In addition,serving as the captital of JiangSu Province,a major province of educatino,it is full of many famous high schools and universities,including NanJing University,Hohai University and NanJing University of Technology. In short,I'm waiting for you.NanJing is waiting for you.
