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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71617
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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It is NanJing that I intend to advise you to visit most.As a economically developed city having a long history,NanJing not only owns advanced economic but also has great and profound Chinese literature. Since,NanJing has existed for centuries,there have been many hesitations left from our actors which represent our ancient civilization,such as Sun Yat-sen Mausolem,Tombof emperor ZhuYuanzhang and XuanWu Lake.All the over places are truly worth your visit and I'm sure you will enjoy yourself so much as to forget to leave there.Meanwhile,being one of several well developed cities in China,NanJing also consists of large shopping malls,beautiful public gardens and various entertainment venues.In addition,serving as the capital of JiangSu Province,a major province of education,it is full of many famous high schools and universities,including NanJing University,Hohai University and NanJing University of Technology. In short,I'm waiting for you.NanJing is waiting for you.

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