2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):交流学生

运用了丰富的复杂句，另外需注意一些句法错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Dear Mr. and Mrs.Brown I am writting to you from my home in China. very appreciate for your graceful take care during living your home , I really felt very luck and happiness , I am very like Mrs. brown cooking , especially for the pezza ,really very delicious,,very thanks Mrs.brown teached me cooks skill, so that some times i tried to cook by myseltf in china , but i think my cooking skill have a long long distance than Mrs brown . here I welcome you come to china travel if you like ,that i have opportunity to reward you , I am glade to guide you to travel in beijing,you can walk on the great wall , palace museum and so on。