新东方托福高分作文:支持艺术还是保护环境？

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For me i think the company should give some money to protect the environment due to the problems of environment is more serious and urgent.As the society devoloped,we use out the energy some day and it is cause directly serious pollution.If the environment becoming more and more serious then we would die in this plante.It would happen if we do not stop what we doing.For example,the air of out of fatory has serious pollute the environment.With the PM up,where we live is unfit to live so that we just is unwilling to living.In this period of the technology and culture are highly developed,we can change the world and make our plante becoming more nice.