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Good friend is a nessisary thing,bacause it's very very important for us and for everyone. Fisrt,good frind can share joy and sad with us,thus we can have a nice day.second,they can play with us and we can chat with eath other and tell secret to relax us. So,accoding these words above,we all need a or more good friend in a daily life.