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My favorite sport Life is movement. When you ask me,what is my faviorite sport,I'll not be irresolute to say:Football.Paying football is my biggest favorite,I like this sport by chance . One day,I went home after class and met a football on the roadside,I picked up and went home.Then I payed with my friends ,from then ,I falled with football deeply. I always play with my classmates for match,and then Beckham is my favorite football star. My dream is be a professional football player. With this dream ,I'll do more hard than before.