小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,her name is Jerry,she has a long hair with brown,her eyes are very beautiful with golden. She is very clever,she is like to dance and sing,we often play table-tennis at Zhuhai gym. She is like to online chat, sometimes we go to musium, we will keep our relationship for ever.