单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,her name is Jerry,she has a long hair and color brown,her eyes are very beautiful and color golden. She is very clever,she is like to dance and sing,we often play table-tennis at Zhuhai gym. She is like to online chat, sometimes we go to museum, we will keep our relationship for ever.