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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3950
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As is shown the chart above, the both charts is completely oppsite.The first chart—life expectance—shows that people's hope towards life are taller in 1990 than 1960.The second chart—infant mortality—shows that infant mortality is lower in 1990 than 1960.There are many possible reasons, for example, the improved leve of living,healthcare and so on. In my opinion of view, in 1960, China is in recession before innovation.People have not enough food and money,so lower life expectancy towards life. And healthcare is poor, short of advantageous equiments and talents, so as to taller infant mortality.In 1990, China is fastly advancing after innovation. Because of supplymentary foods , accessible jobs ,and greater healcare, people are full of expectance to life, infant mortality is lowing.

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