2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Beijing city If my foreign friend go to visit me ,i will take him to Beijing city.As we know Beijing city is our captal city.There also is the economic center. Beijing city has a long history.Such as The Great Wall and Tian an center.Chnia geverment in Beijing.Beijing city is a big city,there are many foreign people.My friend will make at home.