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I have a good friend,she is my classmate,her name is Lucy.She is a beatiful girl.She has two big eys and long hair.She is tall and thin.We often go to school by bikem,and sometime on foot.She is a funny girl. like music and sport. She take part in School Games every years. She is a nice girl,alwayz help others. She likes Janpanese food. eat more and more times.She very loves her family,we love each other forever.