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My new teacher is a boy,he came from Canada.Teach history of us.He was graduated of history at the American Unversity.When he came the classroom,we very like him,he is a handsome boy,wearing the white shirt and black trousers. His class is very humorous and profound knowledge.He ofthen take us going to the museums and told us what happened in the past.we very interested. He said nothing is impossable if you keep going.The dream will come true.