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In China,there are many kinds of traditional festivals,and The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the important national festivals.Many people celebrate it. It falls on fifth ,May for memory of a great person who called Quyuan.Quyuan was borned in Chu country and he was suicide himself oneday.people love and respect him,it is the reason of The Dragon Boat Festival.At that day ,people all over the country eat Zongzi and rowing boat on the river .Besides ,there are many interesting things at that day. In a word ,as a Chinese ,we should protect our national festival ,do other festivals just as The Dragon Boat Festival .
