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Hey man.Look at over there!The handsome boy is our new teacher,he come from England.He graduated of Chinese from the Tsinghua University.He is our Chinese teacher. He has profound knowledge and hamorous in his course. we very like him. He is good at play baskeball and football.Sometimes he take part in school games and get good ranking.We always say he is a perfect man.