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I am Lihua.In the school,I see some classmates like to copy others' homework.They would copy others' homework because they have a lot of homework also hard.So lazy. And they aren't interested in the subject. So they let the teacher happy for finishing the homework. It is bad for them to copy others' homework. They should be a honest student to work hard. If they have trouble ,they should ask the teacher and classmates.
