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In recent years,people find themselves under increaling pressure from education,career,or family.We often hear cases of going mad or committing suicide of those who cannot relieve their stress well. So it has become a hot topic how to manage one's pressure .Regarding this, I argue that it is really important to keep a good mood. For one thing, it helps you get along well with others. If you keep a good mood, you would take an optimistic and positive attitude towards life. You consider your classmates or colleagues as friends rather than rivals. Thus, you cooperate with others well and are popular in your circle.Consequence,you spend every single day in a harmonious atmophere. For another, your hearth benefits from your good mood. When in good mood, you would not often get angry. Life is full of ups and downs. When you are in trouble or frustration, you would take it in reasonable way and overcome it in a short time. All in all,we mudt be fully aware of the importance of keeping a good mood in order to face the pressures or stress of modern society.
