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In older to,the Teachers and students know more than chian space flight,my school will hold to once public lecture. Speaking people is li bo professor with peking university,opening time is five day one month,in 2:30 thursday afternoon.Place is school leture hall. Libo professor speak chian space flight process and background,the general situation of the development of the shenzhou series of spacecaraff.Chian astronaut is very important in the life.