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2013年2月23日雅思大作文真题TASK

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:29浏览次数:858
要求:
Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries.
What're the reasons for this problem?
What're the effects on the society?
写作思路:
有关科目设置的题基本上都是有关中小学的,如science 对比arts, 而关于大学的题目主要是讨论理论课和专业课的侧重问题,从这一点来说,这是一道新题。回答这道题首先要明确一点:不选择science的学生都转向哪里了?近年大学比较流行的专业有business, accounting, economics, nursing, computer science, communication, education. 第二点,science到底指什么?它指的是physics, chemistry, biology
第一段:science 不像以前那么流行,很多学生转向business, accounting, economics
第二段:原因有
1 难学
2 毕业后的工资不如商科高
3 实用性不高
第三段:负面影响
1 科学与物质生活的紧密联系
2 science是很多实用学科的基础
第四段:总结
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Few students tend to choose science subjects as their first choice when they go to university,which results there are not enough students going about related work.I think some reasons can demonstrate this situation basically. Admitivelly,large pressure from employment leads that students have to think of their choice twice,which demand them to focus more on skill instead of their interesting.However,science subjects are set for those people who are willing to devote themselves into science career without too much pay off of money.Also,traditional attitude of parents is that their children can have fixed job to support themselves.In addition,young students have a dream of working relaxing and enjoyment,not like the work of science with boring and the daily grind. This tendency will obviously cause effects on society.Firstly,you can find that the competition among employees is more huge due to everyone has the same skill,and employers have enough opportunities to pick up the best one they need.In the other hand,the problem of unbalance development of different subjects will present,which can result in the standstill of the development of science subjects.However,we should clearly know the importance of science to our life,especially those great inventors,as the results of science. So,it is an important thing to solve this problem.As for schools,setting up interesting groups to cultivate students' extant hobbies.Besides,government also can fund for science career,and elevate their reward of research also can stimulate more students to attend science subjects.

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