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【题目要求】
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.【题目分析】
注意审题。是teenager而不是college students。Teenagers have jobs，这显然是一个BAD idea。Teenager，意指十几岁的孩子——16岁或者18岁以下(18岁以上就是adult了，16、7的孩子往往被称之为 young adults。参见：[61])。雇用童工(Employing children labor)目前在很多国家是非法(illegal)的。也违反国际儿童保护条约(International Children Act )。允许雇用童工，或存在童工现象，都是一个国家落后愚昧的表现。不要说teenager打工可以锻炼自我，teenager需要的是接受教育，健康成长；不要说teenager打工可以认识社会，teenager还不具备足够的心理承受能力(psychological endurance)，过早步入社会 (early exposure to the real world)，只能导致世界观、价值观(out look of world, value, etc.)的扭曲(deteriorated; distorted)。如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，但请注意单词拼写的检查；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Recently, a heated discussing above whether or not the teenage should have a job.From teenage's opinion,they maybe want to have a job in their teenage age.they think this is a way to inprove their abilities. However, what they want can be afford what they can do .This is a doubt.From my perspective,the teenage should not have jobs. There are mumeous reasons accounting for my opinion.I would like to explore there important ones . First and foremost,as teenagers ,they are not fully ready to take part in society.The pressure of society that some adults can not adjust to can not be beard by teenagers.As the teenages have not enough psychological endurance .If they step into society early,they will be misled by the wrong outlook, outlook on life and values.Fourthermore,some teenage say that they can leran much from jobs and get much experience for future life.But they neglect this point that their task at present is study. they just learn much knpwledge from school.they will have a promising futere. Last but not least,companies employing teenagers isa illegal act.The Law formulated clearly that any company is forbiden to use teenage as empoyee. From what has been discussed above ,we can safely conclude that the idea of having a job in teeager is unreasonable .they should finish their present work rather than to enter society, which is good for them.
