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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3958
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The table shows the life expectancy was under 40 while infant mortality was near 200 in 1960. In 1990, the life expectancy reached near 60 while infant mortality was reduced to 100. Maybe there are two main reasons account for this great change, the speeding development of medical technology. Medical system has developed fastly in the 30 years from 1960 to 1990, including examination equipment, medical technology and medicine research. As medical technology advanced rapidly, people can have a better examing systems to check the root cause of their illness and also surgries or treating measures that never be done before to cure their diseases. When women given birth to babies with advanced and professional medical aid, their success rate is higher than those who did not have advance medical aid. So the infant mortality can be reduced by nearly 50 percent in 30 years. Technology improving human's life.

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