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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1956
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇,但词汇量不大,且存在拼写错误;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Since mental decide behavior,we can not disregard our mental health.Is important to imporve our mental health,especially students.Without a healthy mental,students will not deal with sorrow ang happiness correctly. For students,school is their mainly life spot.Any achievement or failure about study affect students' chycolog.School should offer lectures about healthy mental to student so that students are able to attain informations about mental.Otherwise,more interesting curriculums should be involved by students.Interesting classes can do positive influence to students'health mentally. To students thensselves,not to cling anything too much and learn to put down.Students should keep in touch with classmates.Most essentially,students should keep delighted everyday.

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