能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards. There is a saying that university is a small society, and the university students are constituents of this society. Actually, this sentence should be taken into consideration when university students choose to do something, they should act themselves as a individual of a real society, because they have to fight to revive, they have to sow their seeds for the future life. In university, every student hardly do something with just interests, and they have to learn how to make a living in the future, so everything they are doing is to accumulate experience, this possess is as the same as sowing the seeds. In the procession of accumulating expierence, students might meet with different difficulties, which will push them to find out proper ways to finish their tasks in order to get their destination, this progress is like nurturing growth, because there might be differents circumstances when farmers nurturing their seeds. Finally, the more experiences a student got, the more can be used by himself in the future, and everything will be more easier for himself, which is like harvesting the rewards. In conclusion, it is not easy for a student to reach success, and it is also not easy for farmers to get harvest, so a stident's success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming.