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Don't be afraid to say "no" We can't live beyond the sociology,because we sometimes need others' help.So we should be willing to help other when they need and ask for us.But we should help other if we can.When others ask for help,we can't be free every time,or their difficulty is beyond our ability.In this situation,we should say "no" to them.But we can know some people even ourselves don't say "no" when we can't.The reason for it is that we think this reaction may hurt them and weaken the relationship between each other.But we never think about the result that we can't give any help as well as have a bad influence.SO everyone,just remember ,give help that we can provide.Don't be afraid to say "no".