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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1833
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
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文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Don't be afraid to say "no" We can't live beyond the sociology,because we sometimes need others' help.So we should be willing to help other when they need and ask for us.But we should help other if we can.When others ask for help,we can't be free every time,or their difficulty is beyond our ability.In this situation,we should say "no" to them.But we can know some people even ourselves don't say "no" when we can't.The reason for it is that we think this reaction may hurt them and weaken the relationship between each other.But we never think about the result that we can't give any help as well as have a bad influence.SO everyone,just remember ,give help that we can provide.Don't be afraid to say "no".

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