拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards. There is a saying that university is a small society, and the university students are constituents of this society. Actually, this sentence should be taken into consideration when university students choose to do something, they should act themselves as a individual of a real society, because they have to fight to revive, they have to sow their seeds for the future life. In the university, students might not do something with just interests, and they have to learn how to make a living in the future, so everything they are doing is to accumulate experience, this possess is as the same as sowing the seeds. In the procession of accumulating experience, students might meet with different difficulties, which will push them to find out proper ways to finish their tasks in order to get their destination, this progress is like nurturing growth, because there might be different circumstances when farmers nurturing their seeds. Finally, the more experiences a student got, the more can be used by himself in the future, and everything will be more easier for himself, which is like harvesting the rewards. In conclusion, it is not easy for a student to reach success, and it is also not easy for farmers to get harvest, so a student's success in university study follows the pattern as that of farming.