高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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My name is Lihua,your pen pal. I came from yangjiang city china.Do you know china history? Chinese people have very much unique traditional festivals.Such as,The mid autumn festival,that day is very important in the china,because everyone can miss his father and mother.The mid autumn festival, he and themselves family going to eat food in the home. They can see moon and eat the moon care.this is very beautiful scenry.