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李军 have already 15 and has been in the middle school for two years .he study hard and always ready to halp others when they are in trouble.he stydy hard and help the blind to crossing the street.he has much inaginative and come up with many wonderful ideas .he is generous and take part in the all kinds of charity actvities and donate the money to charity.he hopes with his strong determination to succeed , he will make steady progress in his studies .
