2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we know,shopping online is a common phenomenon.For this phenomenon,people's attitude differ sharply. Some people think that shopping online has been a kind of fashion.They claim that it can provide them with life convenience.For example,they can buy things without going far away from home,which help them save their precious time to do something important.Next,shopping online will never cost us a lot of money,but we can buy something really valuable. Others think that although it has many advantages,it brings us some problems.We may be cheated by certain persons so that we will lose a great amount of money.For this,our mood will be affected,and then bring some psychological problems. As for me,only when we take advantage of it can we gain more advantages.We should make proper use of it.