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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40893
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As we all know,what you see and hear may be not the truth,if you think all of the things together,you wil get a different result.Making a quick conclusion may lead to a bad consequence.So when you want to make a decision,you should take it easy. We can not consider that what we see and hear must be the truth.If someone let you see and hear something deliberaterly and you really believe them,then you will make a mistake and you may hurt somebody that is kind for you.When we decide to do something,we shuold have better to communicate with other people and ask them to give some advices. Remenber that when making a decision,you should think again and again to make sure that your dicision is correct and you will never regret of it.

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