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As we all know,what you see and hear may be not the truth,if you think all of the things together,you wil get a different result.Making a quick conclusion may lead to a bad consequence.So when you want to make a decision,you should take it easy. We can not consider that what we see and hear must be the truth.If someone let you see and hear something deliberaterly and you really believe them,then you will make a mistake and you may hurt somebody that is kind for you.When we decide to do something,we shuold have better to communicate with other people and ask them to give some advices. Remenber that when making a decision,you should think again and again to make sure that your dicision is correct and you will never regret of it.
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