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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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I am vary appreciated that i have such charming hometowm--NanNing.Most peopel call NanNing to "Lvcheng" because that there are so many trees.and you will see the green when your first sigt.There are a lot of famouse place.for a exmple.ZHONGSHAN road ,QINGXIU moutain,THE SOUTHIN LAKE park and so on.But I think by myself that the most interesting place is ZHONGSHAN road. At first .Those buildings was so incident in the road,you will feel amazing when you gone there in the morning.second,The road is a delisious food road,There will have a lot of store saling delisious food in the night.and the food come from somewhere aroud the world. so I am looking forword to you come here and I will show you my hometown.

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