作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Glat to have opportunity to present my attitude to the university arts festival to be held in the next semester.As an English major, I wish we could have an English song contest during the arts festival. The reasons are quite clear.Above all, there is a strong demand for English -related activities on campus. I have orgainized several English -related activities,such as English drama performance, English reading contest. All of these activities have been warmlu welcomed and produced satisfactory result. According to the feedbacks students of our university hope to have more chance to take part in this kind of activities. So I think an English song contest can reach this purpose. A further reason for my suggestion is that such an activity can surely create the atmosphere of English learning. If CET4/6 or TEM4/8 examination are the only during force for us to study E nglish, our study is dull and boring.And English song contest provide anoher kind of the stimulation. During the course of preparing for the contest, the players will improve their listening and speaking capabilities.What's more , the audience will also find their passion for English renewed. To sum up, an English song contest offers so many benifits that is really a sensible decision to include it in the university arts feastival.