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In my mind,guangzhou is the most actratived city in china.guangzhou is a city with long time history .it has many tradtionnal budlings and clutrue as well as modern buldings and art .in guangzhou,you can eat many tasted snakes in the beijing road .what' more,you can visit many kinds of parks ,such as haizhu lake park,baiyun park ,shijiao park,and so on.if you want to visit marvlous bulding,you can go to the guangzhou tow which named xiaomanyao.you will suprise to see many foreigners in guangzhou .many of them settle in guangzhou for many years,and they use to the pattern of life in guangzhou.guangzhou is at the southen of china,it has the suitable weather that many fruits can be planted in guangzhou.if you want to visit the china,i will suggest you go to guangzhou first
