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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；能够简单运用一些从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, volunteering has become a hot public activity. The increasing of people were willing to be a volunteer. As far as i am concerned, i support volunteering because it has many benefits for us. Volunteering is a beneficial acts which brings us many benefits. First, we can make many friends through take part in volunteering. Because there always have many people who have the same targets as you. Of course, we can also make friends with the one who we have helped. Second, to be a volunteer is a honer, when we help others out of trouble, we are the hero of their eye, which makes us feel we are special and satisfied our dream of to be a hero. In addition, when we help others, we will feel happy because our personal value has improve by this way. In fact, to be a volunteer has many beneficial. However, we shouldn't be a volunteer for the benefits, but for help more people
