高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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there are a hometown where has clean water with green mountain.when you come here,you must be intoxicated.the howetown where i was born and grew. i can't foget thing which spent my chilhood with it . in my memories,the sky is blue , the air is fresh. the could is white .i often go out with my parner,which go fish and swimming near my house river .it is unforgetable for me to spent time in flying kites with parner in the field.when i see the kites flying in the sky ,i hope can like it can fly to the others place.nowadays,i was letf my countruside that i found the outside world really not i imagine that wonderful.i prefer to my quiet and beautiful countryside.