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Travel Broadens the Mind With the development of economy,nowadays travel has becoming an important part of our life.Absolutly,it is also a more and more popular way for people to spend their spare time.Travel is very significant for people's development,and in my eyes,the major meaning of travel is it can broadens our minds. Why I think travel broadens the mind?When you ask people for this question,I believe most of them will points out the benefits of travel to you.But there are some reasons of mine.First,travel is a quick fix to cover the terrible mood.When a pile of work in front of you or your life is going into a mess,you might be stressful.And at that time,you are badly need an effective way to change this situation,and travel is the best way for you.Your experience will be enriched during a long trip,and your disappointment and negative mood will be gone when you over the journey and return home.And at that time,you can totally devote yourself into the work again.Second,during a long trip especially a travel abroad,your mind will be changed a lot because of the eye-sights broaden.Maybe sometimes you cannot realize the influence immediately,but the process is potential and continuous.Besides,you could learn a lot those you're never knew before during the fascinating trip,which will be significant and functional for your future. In brief,travel not only can change your mood but also broaden the mind effectively,which contributes to set up a positive and wise attitude toward life.
