5. 参考词汇:在农村:in the countryside
正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My father My father is a teacher. He is born on January the first in Beijing.Three years ago,he worked in a middle shcool in the countryside.he often goes to work by bus.Now,he works in the Fourth Middle School.And he goes to school on foot.he often plays basketball with his students.And students also like him.So he gets on well with them. In his class,students are very active. I love my father and I am proud of him.