5. 参考词汇:在农村:in the countryside
单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My father My father is a teacher. He is born on January the first in Beijing.Three years ago,he worked in a middle school in the countryside.he often goes to work by bus.Now,he works in the Fourth Middle School.And he goes to school on foot.he often plays basketball with his students.And students also like him.So he gets on well with them. In his class,students are very active. I love my father and I am proud of him.