从句使用很棒,但简单句比重偏高;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
It is unwise for anyone to jump a conclusion when they hear or see something instantly.Altough what you see is right,but there are also disunderstanding which may be happended.So we are supposed to take step before thinking.Only this can we find an authentic answer about what we want to know.
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