作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Time flies fast. In a few months I'll graduate from this university. During these four years, in order to enrich my brain , I have to learn lots of knowledge and skills. In order to improve my pronunciation and listening ability, I try to speak English with others and I read many English texts in the morning and listen to English listening materials in my spare time. I read more English articles after class, and I keep on writing diaries in English. Though it's a hard work, I think It's worthing doing. In a word, in order to find an ideal job, I have been studying hard for nearly four years, I have been enriching my brain with lots of knowledge and skillls.