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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4049
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题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

  Time flies fast. In a few months I'll graduate from this university. During these four years, in order to enrich my brain , I have to learn lots of knowledge and skills. In order to improve my pronunciation and listening ability, I try to speak English with others and I read many English texts in the morning and listen to English listening materials in my spare time. I read more English articles after class, and I keep on writing diaries in English. Though it's a hard work, I think It's worthing doing. In a word, in order to find an ideal job, I have been studying hard for nearly four years, I have been enriching my brain with lots of knowledge and skillls.

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