2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, more and more people like shopping online. Online shopping become popular among young peaple. And it's fashionable in all over the world. Online shopping is very convenient. We do not need to go out to buy what we need, which save our a lot of time. And we can look for something which can not be easy to find in the stores. And some articles are more cheaper online than what are in the stores. Online shopping give some work chances to people who just graduated from University or College. And this kind of selling improve the improvement of social economic.