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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
With the development of the Internet, Cyber Education is becoming more and more popular. It is also regarded as a wonderful tool. However, Cyber Education has advantages and disadvantages. What are the advantages of Cyber Education? Firstly, Cyber Education brings us a rich fund of knowledge, so we can select some subjects that we are interested in without being limited by school. Secondly, not only can we save much time that we spend going to school，but also can study in spare time. What's more, if we don't understand what the teacher says in time, we can review it one more time. Above all Cyber Education is very low-cost. How useful Cyber Education is! But Cyber Education has also disadvantages. For example, once we learn too long on the Internet, we will hurt our eyes. Besides, there is no posibility for us to mark teacher's card and discuss with the teacher face-to-face. Personally, I think that the advantages of Cyber Education outweigh its disadvantages. It is very convenient for us to study by Cyber Education wherever we are.
