2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

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it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket If you have hundreds of eggs,are you willing to put them all in one basket?i'm sure you will not!why?focous you attention on what i will say,and then make a drugement about what i saig is right or not on the first ,there may not be a so big basket to put your eggs ,i mean ,when your eggs are too many .i'm not joking.And whether the basket is strong enough to riseve so many eggs.because once the basket broken,your eggs are gone.Can you take a such risk? The answer is abviously not.Secondly,if you put your eggs in different basket ,you will find that you eggs are not so easily broken.There are pressure between eggs,too many eggs in one basket can broken more easy.When people want to investigate just like you have many eggs.If you put all your many into one project ,you are more likely suffer .Of course if you succeed ,you will earn more.But if you fail ,all you money will be gone,and you will have nothing. That all my oppinion on why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket.