作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the rapid development of the society,there are many things that we watch and listen in our daily life.However,it is unwise to draw a conclustion as soon as we get the information.Careful thinking plays a significant role when we make decidsion. The following reasons can account for my point of view.Firstly,if we do whatever without consideration,we may easily get into trouble which we might avoid it.What's more ,the hurrier we are ,the more errors consquences we will make.Last but not least,pondering questions can save much more time than immidiant conclusion. In a word ,it is high time that we took measures to think deeply befor we do anything.Only by this way ,can we succeed in the end.
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