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山东临沂市临沭县2013届高三下学期模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:30浏览次数:1168
要求:

如何利用课间10分钟?有些高中学生课间依旧在教室认真学习(如图1),也有些高中学生走出教室积极活动(如图2)。请根据下面两幅图片用英文写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 简要描述图片;
2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想: 你更喜欢哪一种方式?简述理由(至少两点)。

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注意:

1. 对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数120左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshed in body and
mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently. Students in class
are usually looking forward to the break.

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshed in body and mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently. Students in class are usually looking forward to the break. Some students want to make use of that period of time hanging out, chatting, playing games or doing some outdoor activities with their classmates. Others want to spend the break reading or reviewing lessons. In a word, school breaks could be either “academic” or “physical”, which is a very interesting phenomenon. For me, I favor the “physical” way of break. I find it very hard when I have too much work to finish, though I have to deal with my homework during the break. I don’t deny some students are really bookworms, absorbing knowledge every minutes. However, I dare say the majority of us students know what we really want and what we really need to do. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. We are struggling for a balance between work and play

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