可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It 's not wise to draw a conclusion as soon as you saw or heard something.The reasons are following: Firstly,If you draw a conclusion as soon as you saw or heard something,you have no enough time to think it over.You might miss some significant information,which lead to misjudge. Secondly,you ought to learn some good advice from others before you make a conclusion ,for you can't know all the details about things and your idea are not comprehensive.One proberb says:Two heads are better than one. Lastly,everything is possible,Things is changing all the time.
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