小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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The name dudu is my lovely dog.It is so cute when it was 9 mouth.It different from another dog,he very sensitive and quickly activity. it likes dump,eat and enjoy bath.It has a white coat and two black eyes. I like his ears best.I often take him outside together to my friend. Today is its birthday,9 yeas old.Happy birthday to my dog.I love you forever.