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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As we all know,what you see and hear may be not the truth,if you think all of the things together,you will get a different result.Making a quick conclusion may lead to a bad consequence.So if you want to make a decision,you should take it easy. We can not consider that what we see and hear must be the truth.If someone let you see and hear something deliberately and you really believe them,then you will make a mistake and you may hurt somebody that is kind for you.When we decide to do something,we had better to communicate with other people and ask them to give some advices. Remenber that when making a decision,you should think again and again to make sure that your decision is correct and you will never regret of it.

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