题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust With the social and technolcy developed, our life getting more and more better.We always use interner to contact each other that will let us lost trust.Because of we are afaird to be cheated. In our life, our partenrs and schools are teach us do not belive strange easily,they are usually want to cheat you do some bad things or cheat your money.