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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the rapidly development of our society.A phenomenon become gradually noticeable that some one who judge person by their appearance. Some argue that appearance can reflect the heart of person partly.FOr example,if some one who looks very serious,he might be a radical guy. A positive man always have a face that full with happiness. I suppose that it is not wise to judge people by appearance.The ability of person is not depend on their appearance.Just like we buy watermelons,the one which looks very beautiful always let you down.That tell us it is not rational.In our daily life.There really does have a kind of discrimination to some one who don't have a good appearance When they are finding job and so on.We should neglect the view of that. Appearance is out of our control.It is given by our parents.We shoudn't to complain or show off about it.Judge people by their appearance is rude and stupid.

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