托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

词汇重复过多

With the development of technology most of people now live in a mordern lifestyle which is convinence and time-saving. However, though there are some merits brought by the city, some people stil claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. In my own perspective, I believe the benefits that come from the city are much more than those of rural areas. It's true that living in rural area can be more health, because this places usually have better air quality than the city. The air quality is really in severe situation in some big cities because of the car emission. What's more, living in rural areas means that you can free from the traffic jam which is annoying but unavoidable in the citys. However I think the benefits of living in cities weigh out it's disadvantages. Firstly, living in the cities means you can get more resource than in rutal areas in some way, such as the edcational resource. The goverment always invest the money into big city to improve the education systems rather than putting the money into the rural places. So if you live in the city you can receive a better education which is good for your future career and makes you more competitive than someone who didn't get good education. What's more, living in the city can be convinence and funny, because there are many supermakets and shopping building in the city so that you can buy anything you desire to freely. Plus, there also some amusement park for people to have fun and relax themselves which can't find in the rural places. All in all, though living in rural areas is more healthier, I still prefer to live in the cities becaue of its convience lifestyle and sufficient resources.